Bound by four walls is our little oasis of love. The air smells of the hunger of a hundred years of longing. Darbari Kanada, the perfect raaga. A touch, two, three, four, building into an embrace. A hesitant kiss, almost doubtful. A second, hurried.
She and I, we lose our clothes, and our masks. Shedding shame on the altar of love; our bodies fuse, wishing we were never two.
“Take me,” she says, “I am yours”. And then, she consumes me whole; I exist no more. Who belongs to whom? We are now one.
The wren and the small gilded fly. Almost Shakespearean. I chuckle at the thought before we die and are reborn, all in one moment.
Now, as I lay with you in my arms, hearing you breathe, watching your breasts heave, smelling you and tasting your sweat, I dissolve. We are now one.
Consummation.


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like it, but u can build it more… maybe you convey what you think you do, but the reader doesn’t read it.
. my two cents.
nice. me likey.
We don’t verbalize that
Words are never good enough
Although, you managed to reach the limit
romanticized
WOW
so the alchemy of desire finally got to you. I almost searched for the mention of Fizz.
awesome……….clap clap..
Three states of mind described – Shyness, Desire, Happiness … in exactly that order. Me likes!
Beautiful! …
This is beautiful.
Wow!! Intense!
“A chaque instant sa grâce, plénitude d’une émotion née de l’harmonie de deux corps”.
Its beautiful and classy. Could not have been better. The words just fit.
Oh BTW, Im definitely going to go back and listen to the Darbari Kanada.