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Hundred Years of Longing

Bound by four walls is our little oasis of love. The air smells of the hunger of a hundred years of longing. Darbari Kanada, the perfect raaga. A touch, two, three, four, building into an embrace. A hesitant kiss, almost doubtful. A second, hurried.

She and I, we lose our clothes, and our masks. Shedding shame on the altar of love; our bodies fuse, wishing we were never two.

“Take me,” she says, “I am yours”. And then, she consumes me whole; I exist no more. Who belongs to whom? We are now one.

The wren and the small gilded fly. Almost Shakespearean. I chuckle at the thought before we die and are reborn, all in one moment.

Now, as I lay with you in my arms, hearing you breathe, watching your breasts heave, smelling you and tasting your sweat, I dissolve. We are now one.

Consummation.

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13 comments for “Hundred Years of Longing”

  1. Who’s tat?

    Posted by Smylee | March 10, 2009, 2:23 PM
  2. like it, but u can build it more… maybe you convey what you think you do, but the reader doesn’t read it. :P :D . my two cents.

    Posted by yam | March 10, 2009, 2:32 PM
  3. nice. me likey.

    Posted by ;) | March 10, 2009, 8:00 PM
  4. :-o

    We don’t verbalize that :P Words are never good enough :P

    Although, you managed to reach the limit :D

    Posted by sahithi | March 11, 2009, 7:44 PM
  5. romanticized

    Posted by giusippe | March 13, 2009, 5:01 AM
  6. WOW

    Posted by Charmie | March 16, 2009, 9:25 AM
  7. so the alchemy of desire finally got to you. I almost searched for the mention of Fizz.

    Posted by Keerthi | April 13, 2009, 9:58 AM
  8. awesome……….clap clap..

    Posted by anhu | June 5, 2009, 7:40 AM
  9. Three states of mind described – Shyness, Desire, Happiness … in exactly that order. Me likes! :)

    Posted by Abhiram | June 6, 2009, 2:35 AM
  10. Beautiful! … :)

    Posted by Abhishek Chopra | June 12, 2009, 11:11 AM
  11. This is beautiful.

    Posted by Nobia | September 15, 2009, 8:44 PM
  12. Wow!! Intense!

    Posted by DC | February 8, 2010, 2:22 PM
  13. “A chaque instant sa grâce, plénitude d’une émotion née de l’harmonie de deux corps”.

    Posted by Jo | February 8, 2010, 7:28 PM

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